I didn't know how amazing is to have children till I have had my little son, Timothy.
Having children is a blessing from God and a big opportunity to raise people with personalities. When a child is born, the parents have to provide him not the best things, but the most useful things as taking care of him and giving him a good education.
Family is the best environment for a child, or it is suppose to be the best one, not the State, not the Government, not the foster families and about this statement I will share with you a story.
On November 2015, in a small town in Norway, the child welfare system took five kids from a Romanian family and split them in tree foster families, even the tree months baby who was breastfeeding. The reason why the child protection system came and took the children it was that the oldest daughter told to her teacher that the mother gave her a slap. The child welfare system didn't investigate the problem, they planed to do this in May 2016. The people from Romanian Government went to Norway to discuss this problem and Romanian people around the World protest and ask to Norway Government to solve the problem. The Romanian community in Vancouver, made a protest two weeks ago, on Family Day, in front of Norway Embassy in Vancouver with hope that children will go back to family as soon as possible.
As a parent I cannot imagine somebody taking my children, give them away in other families and to cannot see them only once a month, it is cruel, it is inhumane.
I hope this story will have a happy end and I pray God helps this family to pass this hard situation.
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The Best Environment to Raise Children
I didn't know how amazing is to have children till I had my little son. Timothy. Having children is a blessing from God and a bid opportunity to raise people with personalities.
When a child is born, his parents have to provide him not the best things, but the most useful things, such as taking care of him and giving him a good education.
The family is the best environment for a child, or is supposed to be the best, not the State, not the Government, and not the foster families, and about this statement I will share with you a story.
In November 2015, in a small town in Norway, the child welfare system took five kids from a Romanian family and split them among three foster families, even the three months old baby who was breastfeeding. The reason the child protection system came and took the children was that the oldest daughter told her teacher that her mother had given her a slap. The child welfare system didn't investigate the problem, They planned to do this in May 2016.
The people from Romanian Government went to Norway to discuss this problem and the Romanian people around the world protest and ask to Norway Government to solve the problem.
The Romanian community in Vancouver made a protest two weeks ago, on Family Day, in front of Norway Consulate in Vancouver in hope that the children will be able to go back to their family as soon as possible.
I hope this story will have a happy end I pray God to help this family to make it through this hard situation.
