Monday, 7 March 2016

A Poem for My Mom

Version 1

March 8th is an important day in Romania my home country, we celebrate Mother's Day.


Because I appreciate you much,
I wrote a poem for you.
I hope your heart to be touched
When I say: "-I love you!"

Today we celebrate your name,
Your kindness and your way to be.
You are not a person with fame,
But you are the world for me.

And now I want to say: "-Thank you!"
For what you make for me.
As a reminder for what you are,
I am going to plant a tree.

Version 2

March 8th is an important day in Romania comma my home country,<<Comma Splice On that day,/It is the day on which we celebrate Mother's Day.

To celebrate Mother's Day tomorrow, I have written the following poem:

A Poem for My Mom


Because I appreciate you much,
I wrote a poem for you.
I hope your heart to<<will be touched
When I say: "-<< say, "I love you!"

Today we celebrate your name,
Your kindness and your way to be<<the way you are.
You are not a person with fame,
But you are the world for me.

And now I want to say: "-Thank you!"
For what you make<<do for me.
As a reminder for<<of what you are,
I am going to plant a tree.



Version 3

March 8th is an important day in Romania, my home country; It is the day on which we celebrate Mother's Day.

To celebrate Mother's Day tomorrow, I have written the following poem:


A Poem for My Mom

Because I appreciate you much,
I wrote a poem for you.
I hope your heart will be touched
When I say: "I love you!"

Today we celebrate your name,
Your kindness and the way you are.
You are not a person with fame,
But you are a Holy star.

And now I want to say: "Thank you!"
For what you do for me.
As a reminder of what you are,
I am going to plant a tree.





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  2. Great! Almost there! :D Just turn the colons before the quotes into commas (see Version 2 correction before "I love you.").
    Lovely poem!

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