Monday 4 April 2016

Loving Canada

Version 1

If one day somebody will ask me "why do you love Canada?" I have an awesome answer for him, I have so many reasons to love Canada. I do so because in my opinion is the best country where I can live.
Canada is a beautiful country with oceans and mountains, long rivers and magnificent lakes, impressive fauna and many more.
Canadian people help you fall in love with their country. They are extremely friendly and polite. As an immigrant I feel comfortable to live among Canadians; they become your friends very easy.
The economy in this country  is high. Canada offers a job, good salary, and a safe life.
The weather is not my favorite because I prefer high temperatures but Canada has places with various temperatures. If you prefer snow in the middle of July go up to Jasper's mountains or you can get a very hot day at the Pacific Ocean. Getting four seasons in one month it was weird but interesting to me.
As a parent, I'm very tankful to this society which sustained having children and it involves in their education.  The Government made and makes programs and activities for kids, school is free of charge and other extra activities are paid by them.


Version 2 (last paragraph)

As a parent, I'm very tankful<<thankful to this society which sustained<<present tense having children and it<<antecedent involves in their education. The Government made and makes programs and activities for kids, school is free of charge and other extra activities are paid by them<<who??.


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